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The Rise Of Fall

The Rise Of Fall

Photography Photography \ Still life | 07/20/05 @290 | eowyn | Comments critiques (53) | Views views (1654)


The Rise Of Fall
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And when the woman saw that the tree was good for food, and that it was pleasant to the eyes, and a tree to be desired to make one wise, she took of the fruit thereof, and did eat, and gave also unto her husband with her, and he did eat.
-Genesis 2 Chapter 3:6-

[The Rise Of Fall.

I did this a month ago. I was inspired by Yasmina's works. So this is for you. This work just so like your works:)]
 
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slaphapy5

 07/20/05 @292

excelent color manipulation. Great clarity. of course great contrast between the apple and the black and white legs.

+8
~slap
 
Avatar Abstractor

 07/20/05 @293

Frety, I love this concept!! very well executed. the angel you chose is really good. I love the contrast between your soft skin and the hard tile floor. excellent work!
Love you, Ayah
 
Avatar zanzibar

 07/20/05 @314

+ desaturation
+ pose
+ composition

excelent shot Aulia.
 
Avatar tchoupitoula

 07/20/05 @320

I like how bright and strong the colors are in the apple. They really look good against the softness of your skin. I also like the ring. I don't know why, but it adds a nice touch. Well done.
 
Avatar FlawlesStyle

 07/20/05 @322

Incredible composition on this piece. And I want that apple now! 7/7 Major Biggups and Respect!

Edit: Oh and awesome title too!
 
Avatar flowjoe

 07/20/05 @327

Excellent desat and composition, and apples are so goooooooood Well done princess, my max
 
Avatar nod423

 07/20/05 @330

Very biblical I love it Fretty:) Very good concept details lighting the best:) Not mentioning the composition:) My Max:)
 
Avatar AaronLP

 07/20/05 @354

It's a nice composition, excellent colors!!
 
Avatar jampy

 07/20/05 @432

very nice effect! the desaturation works very well here.
gives me a strange feeling i can't describe
:)
(thumbup)
 
Avatar audentia

 07/20/05 @435

A modern way to describe an old story! Good idea! It's human, and it's sensetive. The desat is very nice, and I like how you made the apple so shiny, makes your message more visible!:)
 
Avatar SubiDome

 07/20/05 @507

nice desat. However the left foot of yours i don't like too much.. the way its above your right foot and makes your hand look weird when focusing on the apple. and your thumb is too straight. Looks kinda weird :p
 
Avatar Simba

 07/20/05 @608

i like the bright color of the apple......it is like a crown jewel.......
amazing......that what gained my attention most :)
 
Avatar cupcake

 07/20/05 @617

The apple really catches your eye .
Very Good
 
Avatar ClaraSoto

 07/20/05 @633

Beautiful desaturation job !!!! NIce compo also !! Good job sister!!!
 
Avatar valkirye

 07/20/05 @652

OHHH Fretty!! I don't know what to say.... Thank you soooo much, really. I love the concept and the picture is perfect. Thanks and lot of kisses for you :):):)
Yasmina
 
Avatar Madanapale

 07/20/05 @707

Hey ....Nice work Fretty....Great concept....and very well executed....I don't blame Adam for taking the apple.....I only find the tiles on the floor a little distracting...maybe a plain clothing would work better....still very good work!
Papito Carlos
 
Avatar RobotJam

 07/20/05 @818

Great work, I love the contrast between the coloured and the black and white +8/8.
 
Klimyntris

 07/20/05 @897

Great job I really like this pic
 
Avatar aphotoart

 07/21/05 @978

very good idea. nice execution. The only thing I can think for improvement is that the upper left side where it shows the frame of the door (or whatever that is) distracts the viewer from the main subject.

well done.
anahi
 
Avatar Mugil

 07/21/05 @280

Interesting idea Fretty! But great job!
 
Avatar MrBlue

 07/21/05 @319

great desaturation!

I love it! +9/9
 
Rannon

 07/21/05 @439

very nice
 
Avatar elf

 07/21/05 @485

Really good work!
 
Avatar OrangeBud

 07/21/05 @593

very very nice shot
+7/7
 
Avatar Dax

 07/21/05 @699

Nice idea!
Maybe the upper left corner is a bit disturbing...
Good shot in any case! :)
 
Avatar darturbrain

 07/21/05 @871

beautiful!
+10
 
Avatar MsMichelleLynn

 07/22/05 @377

This is so very nicely done. Your photoshop work here is excellent. You have produced a nice sharp, crisp apple yet your skin is so soft . I like your composition as well.

Maybe you shouldn't have cut off your big toe though.

Well done Fretty.
 
Avatar sdavis75

 07/22/05 @465

Just love it. No crits. 9/9!
 
punkagrrlzero

 07/22/05 @628

wow Fretty... this is just.. wow.
me likes!
;)
 
Avatar Diane

 07/22/05 @886

Excellent desat work, good composition
+10
 
Avatar reilanchan

 07/23/05 @132

Not much to say.
It's impressive.
I am fascinated by this perspective :)
 
Avatar Alena

 07/24/05 @485

just the best :)) i could look at it for hours
 
Avatar ARTOONATOR

 07/24/05 @552

With a rare exception, your photographs are still amateuristic. I thought I would see some progress by now, but unfortunately this isn't the case.
Allthough this one is nice, nice is all it is. You should've been practicing on a more complex level seeing the time that has past.
Just my opinion.
 
Avatar SudnDeath

 07/25/05 @279

great shot - the color dynamic is great +8
 
Avatar mrhollow

 07/25/05 @304

Very striking, great use of desaturation, and the legs make a nice curve. The setting is a little distracting. Great contrast, and nice shot.

Cheers.
 
Avatar hady

 07/25/05 @471

amazing.!!!!
8o i wanna eat your legs .
!!!OOOOOPS mean this apple :p

good one 10+
 
Avatar Asiyah

 07/25/05 @484

I realy don't know why everybody like this shot.
You have done a betters ones.

I don't like the background... it's not clever.
I don't like the pose of the model, her fingers, the ring.
I don't like the colored apple over that kind of b&W.

It's a good shot, but not THAT great shot .

Clever idea but it's roug a lot.
 
Avatar pegahoul

 07/25/05 @754

The apple is nice, but the other.. I don't feel it match the concept you wrote... I mean, sitting in a balcony is not the same with sitting in paradise... Good angle by the way.
 
PrinceofEgypt

 07/25/05 @808

fantastic compesition, amazing really, well done :)
 
Avatar sami

 07/25/05 @828

My mouth is so wide open that a football can go through it

SUPER work.

sami
 
bbreeze

 07/25/05 @861

this one is good. the style i love best of all
 
Avatar Antidromic

 07/26/05 @139

Love this shot. The desaturation is perfect, and I just love the idea, I wish I could get inspired again :( Gosh I almost wish I could see a flaw so I could help you improve! Good good good.

Wes
 
Avatar maytree

 07/26/05 @473

i haven´t been a long time here and see you are better and better. this is very interesting shot eowyn! i like the pose, the apple could be a little desaturated. ;)
 
Avatar Moni

 07/26/05 @757

what an extra ordinary shot
 
Avatar bluewaterkidd

 07/30/05 @007

id' love to bite into it!... the apple too...
 
Avatar Almost-Human

 07/31/05 @456

Hey ,, sorry for being late 10+
 
Avatar Madilynnn

 08/03/05 @128

Very interesting! :) I love the selective desat... and the pose works perfectly. I wouldn't have cropped your foot off, but that's just personal taste. The silver ring is a nice touch! Good work.

- Rene
 
Avatar Jewel

 08/23/05 @959

Absolutely Beautiful. I love everything about this, especially the lighting.
 
Avatar Ikaa

 09/02/05 @790

Aww, you have a beautiful gallery girl :) and this is one excellent shot among many. As people already mentioned it is a good modern version of an old,old story (and I'm sure not blaming anyone for taking any fruits ) Good composition, beautiful soft grayscale. My only comment would be the ring on the forefinger, maybe it would been have been an overall cleaner approach wihout it...nevertheless...
Great shot, splendid execution and a very good work on the destauration!! Full marks.
 
Avatar eowyn

 09/03/05 @299

hey thank you Ikaa:) as I admire your gallery too!!!
 
Avatar Mav

 09/07/05 @160

Nice color manipulation!
 
Avatar Mav

 09/07/05 @160

Sorry by the message duplication. It seems a bug...
 
Avatar Ringgold

 09/30/07 @611

Wow! I love these and your have great galery.
 
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GFXuser name:
   eowyn
Full Name:
  Fretty Aulia
Gender:
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Birthdate:
  01/15/1981 (27)
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  Indonesia
Member since:
  03/08/2004

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