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Her Shadow

Her Shadow

Photography Photography \ Figure | 07/24/05 @315 | eowyn | Comments critiques (27) | Views views (628)


Her Shadow
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Walking with his shadows
Breathing with his lost long breeze
Waiting for the wind of his touch caress hers
Oh just seeing with his eyes

One time wish she were blind so that she couldn't see
One time wish she were deaf so that she couldn't hear
One time wish she were numb so that she couldn't feel
One time wish she were evil so that she couldn't love
One time wish her heart stop beating...
so that she could say to God she achieved her full circle.

She asked;
Oh Lord,
Why does it feel so far yet so close?
Why does this sorrow taste so sweet?

She cried;
Would it be only shadows for me?
Am I only here for no reason?
Is our love only shadows?

::Her Shadow by aulia2005::


[This is my entry for the H2H CHallenge, and my competitor is Jose, eremita...go see also to his work; Loneliness by Elite, GFXartist sponsor eremita Our theme is about Loneliness.

The model is my cousin who live in my dad's town. She suddenly walked toward the window. And I was holding my camera. Then without hesitation, I shot her. This was taken only once, since there were little boys annoyed me cause they never seen a digital camera before LOL. I hate shoot something only once, cause there'd be no comparison. This was titled, because of that the image became a bit smaller. Cause I had to crop it in square. And so I put black border just a bit to make it a bit taller and it blend so well. So anyway this kinda remind me a lot of my old one "Princess" Enjoy seeing and feeling the mood

Check also the sepia version.]
 
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Avatar eremita

 07/24/05 @323

This is maybe one of your best photos, Tecnically what I love the most is the vibrant green on the kind of light, then about the concept WoW!
 
Avatar nod423

 07/24/05 @323

I love the concept Fretty and great shot and composition, but I like the sephia more:) Am curious about that H2H:)
 
Avatar eowyn

 07/24/05 @327

Jose you and I like the same thing, I love the most from the photo is the vibrant green against the shadow....but hell your entry is wayyyyyyyyyyyyyy awesomer!!!!
Damn you!!!
 
Avatar zanzibar

 07/24/05 @333

very well done, I love it, Fretty!
 
Avatar sami

 07/24/05 @365

Yep very nice picture indeed

sami
 
Avatar sami

 07/24/05 @376

Yep the picture is nice indeed.

sami
 
Avatar tchoupitoula

 07/24/05 @383

I don't know which version I like more. I like the sepia's earth tones, and the bright colors of the original. The entire shot was executed very well. Great work.
 
Avatar audentia

 07/24/05 @402

Beautiful capture! I like the green, it really gives this photo a nice mood. I like the way she stands in the middle of the door, as if the concept is being framed. Nice!:)
 
Avatar powernemo

 07/24/05 @575

Interesting shot! Colors are very awesome! And about colors both version are very excellent ! Maybe the sepia it's slighlty less distracting because the continuos tone (wich i love), but definitely the color one rocks. (and btw the color of the tent and of the foliag match perfectly)! Nice! (thumbup)
 
Avatar Passenger

 07/24/05 @583

I love the effect of the green curtain kind of thing! nice shot!
 
punkagrrlzero

 07/24/05 @728

nice shot Fretty.. uh.. only one crit... the trees on the woman's head.. remove them???
bit distracting.. but all else very nicey.
;)
 
Avatar Madanapale

 07/24/05 @731

Very nice backligting......Great sensation of loneliness.....beautiful colors....It would be nice if only sky would show on the background...just my taste...and not yout fault....Very well done Fretty!
Papito Carlos
 
Avatar Dax

 07/24/05 @738

Nice work Fretty! The green is wonderful! :)
 
Avatar Abstractor

 07/24/05 @859

I absolutly adore this shot, from the dark silhouette to the subtle greens ...even the tiny bit of blue in the sky. I find nothing to improve. excellent work!
love you, Ayah
 
Avatar cupcake

 07/25/05 @013

Wonderful work
It was a very good idea.
 
Avatar mrhollow

 07/25/05 @273

Nice work, I agree that the sky would be nice to see more clearly (Maybe taken at a different time of day?), but the photo has great composition.

Thank you for your recent comments and warm welcome back.

Cheers.
 
Avatar flowjoe

 07/25/05 @319

love it love it love it love it LOVE IT: You knew that allready, this is a fantastic shot and it is cool that you got such a good photo even with light that difficult. Well done, my max
 
Avatar Mugil

 07/25/05 @751

Fretty you are every day better and better! A wonderfull work from you, maybe it is ma fav from you :)
 
Avatar beatrizmatar

 07/25/05 @805

Gooooooooood work sweetieˇˇˇˇˇ
:))))
Bea
 
Avatar FlawlesStyle

 07/26/05 @094

Hey Fretty, what a great photo you've taken here....the contrast between the outside and the inside is just wonderful. Great job, +7/7
 
Avatar Andrzej

 07/26/05 @600

Interesting shot...
tech. sky is overexposed but rest looks really good... in my opinion this colour version looks better because u don't lose a fantastic pattern and colour of material in window... good work...
 
Avatar maytree

 07/26/05 @608

i like your idea there, very nice green color, but for me is the sepia version better ;)
 
Avatar valkirye

 07/26/05 @693

I like so much how it looks, but maybe the elements outside the window distract my attention.
Yasmina
 
Avatar emarts

 07/28/05 @872

"Then without hesitation, I shot her." LOL
 
Avatar bluemonkey

 07/29/05 @011

i really like the compostition and the contrast in this one. thats also a really cool shad of green to go with this picture. its all glowy and stuff and i like that. gj
 
Avatar Moni

 07/30/05 @722

wow....I loved this shillhoutte
 
Avatar Madilynnn

 08/03/05 @126

This one is fab... the green color is awesome! This is very creative work. I wish I could have seen a bit more of the sky, but that's my only crit. Great job!

- Rene
 
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GFXuser name:
   eowyn
Full Name:
  Fretty Aulia
Gender:
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Birthdate:
  01/15/1981 (27)
Country:
  Indonesia
Member since:
  03/08/2004

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